Below please find my script for a virtual tour, not sure if it is a good idea or if my creativity got out of hand. . . .
Hhhhhhhhhi there
How are you on this beautiful day???
Thank you for your interest in me, I am flattered.
My name is B.B. , Beach Beauty, in case you did not know.
And the pictures you see are what I look like on the inside.
I really hate to brag about myself, but my Realtor says I am absolutely gorgeous and very unique. She calls me "One of a kind" and says thing like " No pictures can do her justice" "The virtual tour just give you a glimpse of this incredible home" "Very charming with lots of character" " Tommy Bahama would be jealous" "Rare find on Sunset beach" " Incredibly romantic beach hide away". . .you get the picture, I think she really likes me!
Well, I thought since she is so impressed by me I should invite you to come inside and see for yourself. I would be delighted to introduce myself in person and make you feel great.
My 3 bedrooms 2 bath and the office offer a lot of space, and don't forget, I also have a loft style mother in law apartment with a separate entrance. My best feature of course is my location. I sit right on the beautiful beach of Treasure Island in the wonderful little tip called Sunset beach.
Once you have seen the real me and not just a tour, I am sure you
will fall in love and if you buy me we can share some wonderful moments and live happily ever after. I was told that I am really lovely, unique, charming, cozy and have lots of character. People like my tropical setting with the beach as my backyard and palm trees and old pine trees, beautiful sunsets very night and the sound of waves. Well of course all this simply make me "irresistible"
As you can tell, I am looking for a real nice person that appreciates me and takes care of me, someone that enjoys the beach and the relaxed lifestyle.
So, what are you waiting for? Let's have a cocktail together and celebrate the sunset.
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Would love to know if you guys on active rain like this voice script or not
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I like it !!! third person (or home in this case) always works good IMO.
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Anne - other than all the Hs in HHHHHHHi, I like it. I'd also suggest a link to the visual tour on the property on this Active Rain post.